The Official Writing Challenge
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03/03/09
I liked the flashbacks to his mother and the lessons she taught him. This is an interesting slice of history.
03/04/09
I liked the POV. Looking throug his mind, imagining what he was thinking, the flashbacks to his mom and her faith. All very compelling.
03/04/09
Wonderful insight into a troubled leader's thoughts. It was, indeed, a decision that altered not only an empire, but the world.
I loved studying the Roman's in school, so this story was right up my alley. You took a historical figure and breathed life into him so that we were able to take a time machine back into the past and witness this event. So glad this one placed high.