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A lovely story of a bittersweet incident made better by the scenic beauty, the polar bears and the lovely God-fearing people who felt your pain...and lifted you up from your gloom... nicely done.
I like this story. Very nice. I think we've all been there. Wish we had such an awesome place to go to be rejuvenated!
A perfect description of the pain and the healing. God is so amazing! So glad your fellow guests at the retreat knew more about grace and love than the ladies in the supermarket queue.
I don't know about this heart hangs heavy. As per usual I love your discriptive writing; you bring me right into your setting. You write for the right reasons...let him lead your hand, pure out what needs to be written. Awesome work! Simply awesome.

Blessings as you write to Glorify Him!

Your Sister in Christ, Trina
I love the descriptions setting the scene of the lodge, and the quiet gathering of the others who came along to support and pray, encouraging. Beautifully done.