The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh, I like this one... So much imagination is packed into this poem!
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.
I love the connection to the wardrobe and the invitation to adventure and enchantment through the imagination of the soul.
This is SO creative, so magical, so well done. I think you truly captured the essence of the wonder of the wardrobe. LOVED IT!
Congrats on placing in the EC.. beautiful story about the famous wardrobe... loved the imagery. Very creative idea.
Nicely done! However, I miss the rhythm and flow of Traditional poetry. (Of course, that's just my personal preference and doesn't take away from the words or sentiment.) I still enjoyed the read and "Congratulations" for placing in Winners Circle.
Congratulations on placing with this lovely poem. The imagery is beautiful.
LOVELY! In my imagination, I entered the enchanted wardrobe through your wonderfully-written piece! My favorite stanza was:
"This is no mere piece of furniture;
Enchantment hangs within
Among the furs and cloaks
Smelling faintly of mothballs."
CONGRATULATIONS on your E.C. win!! :)
This is lovely. I enjoyed the description and relived my own Narnia experience as I read your words. Congratulations!
I love what you did with this... how creative...! Congrats on your EC, Emily!