The Official Writing Challenge
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01/30/09
Good story, but think this writing could be expanded a bit to give the reader a fuller understanding of your Prince--the King of Kings.
01/31/09
Oooh, definitely expand this--a beautiful allegory based on Scripture.

I'm afraid it might be "off topic" for this geographical theme--it was supposed to be the UK on the map, not a spiritual kingdom.

Nevertheless, your passionate heart for the ultimate united kingdom was very apparent!
02/03/09
The bride waiting for her groom. How romantic this is. Expand please, I'd love to read more.