The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/09
Great descriptions, especially of Scotland. Wish I would have read your story before I wrote mine! Good job!
01/29/09
Ahhhh, I can't wait to go.... great descriptions and nice form, very casual.
01/30/09
Your story brought back memories of my sister's time in Scotland...except she was on the verge of tears whenever she had to drive there! :-) Excellent descriptions, and your warm tone conveys the warmth you felt on your visit.
01/31/09
I really got a kick out of this--when I was in England, one of the things that constantly delighted and surprised me was the many, many differences in the "same" language. This was lots of fun to read.
02/02/09
Your beginning was quite comical, especially the plane and the train incidents. Very descriptive and fun to read and learn.