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Well, you sold me on a trip! :-) I had similar thoughts about wanting to see it all this week. What I liked about this piece was your effort to record realistic dialogue that includes dialect and the play on words that results from (mis)communication. Love the last line, too.
From someone who knows nothing about Australia, you gave me a lot to think about. Almost made me want to visit. And I agree, that last line is a kicker. Very good job.
Brilliant dialogue - Had to laugh at the ending too.
I have friends who just returned from several weeks vacationing in Australia & they sent a number of emails while traveling; much of what your characters described sounds like what they saw & experienced. I enjoyed "listening in" on this conversation!
Funny, funny. Your play on words drew in my attention, the dialogue held me. Very good.
I'm giggling - Punkin'Breath??? Is that a term of endearment?? LOL!! Great little piece, too funny and all the info of a travel brochure. Well done.
Oh, this was so much fun. Love the humor and the ending is perfect.
What I'd like to do is follow this couple around Australia...can you imagine the looks they'd get?! Clever mode to pass along information.