The Official Writing Challenge
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Such an entertaining story filled with deep truths. Well written and so believable. Loved it.
Thanks for an interesting and thought provoking entry. It was made even better because I'm holidaying in Ballarat as I read it :-)
Good job. I enjoyed reading this. I almost expected a different treasure to be found. However my expectations were, you ended it well.
This was a good story. Very well told and left me wishing for more of it to read. I'd like to read what this could be without a word limit. Nice job.
I was captivated. What a wonderful tale and so cleverly woven. I want to see the movie when it comes out. :)
Well crafted story that draws your reader into the scenes. Excellent writing and message.
Excellent storytelling. Left me wanting more!
Very well written - great dialogue and a superb ending. Well done!
What a great story!! Well told, well written, and and a joy to read. I enjoyed this one a lot.