The Official Writing Challenge
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OH, that's too funny. You succeeded in grabbing my attention to begin with. You held my attention with the easy banter between this couple, and then the end was delightful. Love the title too. :)
01/16/09
Cute surprise ending--I wonder where they'll go?
01/19/09
This made me smile. Our holiday planning is a bit like this! I tend to want to see everything there is to see, and run the risk of actually doing nothing. Nice job.
01/20/09
I loved this piece, the way they made their decision is much the way I would do. Too many choices, not enough time...
Lots of fun reading and imagining this story being played out.
This was a clever way to show much of the USA and was a very interesting story as well.