The Official Writing Challenge
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Wow! A real heartbreaker.
Absolutely incredible, Loved it
Absolutely wonderful. You had my attention from the title. Great, great job!
Tnis is a well-written, touching story.
Wow, tough, a heart string puller. Great writing. Thanks.
Such a great job! The suspense just kept building as I tried to figure out your plot, then it all became so very clear. Very compelling.
Great title for a story like this. Very heart-breaking but very wise.
God bless ya, littlelight
Wow, this is awesome. Definitely one of my favorites. Good job!
Sad but oh so true. You did a good job on such a delicate subject. Well done.
I love the angle that you wrote this story on. Beautiful and touching. Thank you for sharing!
Nice work! You maintained the simplicity of the character's voice very well.
A stunner. I was hooked. This is among my favorites this week.
Excellent! Perfect twist on the theme
You hooked my heart right in the center! Excellent job!
Definately a top 8 in my book. Nice writing on a complex topic from a child's perspective. Always sad to see a marriage end.
This was so very well told from the child's perspective. A child would not understand the need to escape, or play a game of hide and seek, and you captured that beautifully.
Heart wrenching, layered story. The child's voice was consistent throughout. Great the way you bought all the threads of the story together through her narrative and the dialogue.