The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/08
Great story - if only it was how we Christians should act. Too bad there was a word limit on this, I'm sure you could have filled in a lot in the transformation of this young lady. Good writing and God bless.
12/01/08
This is so sad but it is very real. Good job protraying hope for this woman.
12/02/08
You could tell from the word limit that you tied this up in the last 2 partgraph with a little bow. But overall good job.