The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story - if only it was how we Christians should act. Too bad there was a word limit on this, I'm sure you could have filled in a lot in the transformation of this young lady. Good writing and God bless.
This is so sad but it is very real. Good job protraying hope for this woman.
You could tell from the word limit that you tied this up in the last 2 partgraph with a little bow. But overall good job.