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A lot of thought went into this article. I appreciate your prayer so very much;

"My prayer is that we open our hearts to the Lord during this special season and experience God’s gift, freely given to us!"

Good Job !!

I would suggest you leave a space between the paragraphs, it is so much easier for your readers...

Have A very Happy Day!!!
No words can ever be enough to express what Jesus' gift of himself meant for the world, and you have boldly brought our attention back to the wonder of the Nativity. My favourite line was 'What an awesome symphony of sound and celebration filled the air', which captures something of the joy of heaven in Jesus' birth.
I echo the other comment, leaving more white space would make this piece much easier to read.