The Official Writing Challenge
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Rich, vivid descriptions, lots of emotion, touching love story straight from a daughter's heart. Well done!
Touching, intimate, truly sweet. I like it.
11/21/08
Beautifully written! Excellent work. Congratulations on your placing!
The vivid imagery of her memories with her dad, and the emotions that went along with them touched me deeply. I felt her love her for dad and felt the significance of her painting on the card. Excellent writing! Congratulations on your well deserved award of second place!
11/22/08
Congratulations on your EC with this eceptional piece!