The Official Writing Challenge
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Fun! Well done. Nice analogies with our Christian life.
Well written. The description of the forest and the gear was very realistic and brought me in. The toast at the end boardered on preachy, maybe because you had had to end it. I think this would be great as a longer piece or as the start to a novel. Good work.
Well written and fun, reminded me of an old hiking partner who would say "just another mile." Which meant we would be walking for hours.
Nicely written -rather ironic that they ended up at Devil's Lake though :)