The Official Writing Challenge
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I was frozen on the stairs right along with EJ! Yes, this one drew me and in and kept me all the way through. Fun!
You captured the childlike excitement of Christmas perfectly. I so enjoyed this piece, I read it out loud to my family.
You painted the scene so perfectly I had to hold my breath while I was reading so as not to make a sound!
Well stuctured. I could see the little boy sneaking down the stairs and feel the adventure and suspense. Way to bring it full-circle as that boy later watches his own sons.
Way to go Anita!! I'm so proud of you!!!
Excellent! I love how you ended it with the twins! Double the trouble.Congratulations!!
It just dawned on me that EJ could be my favorite kitchen make-over guy. Congrats on 3rd place.