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this poem has a really nice tempo. It was fun to read and i like the little tongue in cheek pokes at what the season has become. A very subtle reminder...
A very good ending (and so true!)! I liked your sarcastic wit in this poem.
This fits the topic quite well. My sentiments exactly about all the store displays.
Some very good turns of phrase here. My favourite was the line about expletives competing with the music in the air. You have managed to make a serious point in a very humourous way indeed. Well done!
Congrats on Highly Commended. This is magnificent!
I felt the build up toward Christmas... very cool poem! Congrats on doing so well, Holly! YEAH!
I liked the simple truth here and the rhythm of the poem. Congratulations on being Highly Commended.