The Official Writing Challenge
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10/25/08
This is ADORable, flows so smoothly, and is perfect for the topic. Very creative!
10/28/08
I love the descriptions of Bitsy "tender heart" and "lisped" "missing teeth" . This is such a sweet and innocent story… the "broken cookies" was perfect, and I loved the "hope you didn't want a cake."
Perfect title, though I had assumed it would be about a pregnant woman :) Good insights to how a child's mind works. Well done.