The Official Writing Challenge
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I LOVE your title! I feel like I know this family. You gave them lots of character. Great job!
The minute details adds so much appeal to this wonderful Christmas story.
I love how you gave the characters such depth. What a wonderful story of family celebrating the birth of Christ. Nicely done.
When we lived in the Bahamas, we placed our gifts around the manger scene instead of a tree. Thanks for reminding me of that.
Wow lovely story and beautifully told.
What a tender love story. Where there is love there is always enough. Your characterizations helped us to truly like this family and your descriptions were vivid.
Beautiful story! I love those forested areas of WA....I think I know the area you're talking about. Nice writing, as well!