The Official Writing Challenge
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Very well written story. Kept my interest. So much going on here. God was with this whole family. Good descriptions. Nicely done.
Thanks for sharing this interesting fast moving story. Some of this stuff happened in my family, so I can relate. Thanks
Great story. Congratulations on your win!
Why didn't this one receive more comments? It's wonderful!

You had me biting my lip in anticipation of what was going to happen towards the end. Your title fits the story and the wonderful ending perfectly.

Congratulations on your highly commended award. :)
I loved this...Well, it almost brought me to tears. I could see it all as it proceeded. Well done. Definately deserves more comments!