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Wow! Very creative.
Wow! I love this. Powerful writing, wonderful message. Thank you.
Very creative, I could see this done as a playette during a contemporary service.
Thank you for posting.
Very well written -I liked the converstaion style.
Powerful and moving! I especially like how you have depicted God caring for His servant and the cares of His servant! Thanks for writing.
Whew.......! I wonder if you had somebody specific in mind when you wrote this, given that it was dated in the 80s. Well done!!!
Excellent! The conversation seemed so real. What a clever idea. Good job!
Hard at any time to place loved ones in God's hands. You make this man's journey of acceptance believable and leave us with hope for his grieving family. A story of a universal experience well told.
Very well written. Letting go, and the fact that nothing was mentioned about the minister experiencing pain in his body. Very creative, I agree. littlelight
You made this work very well. Good writing. Good job - excellent!
A very compelling dialogue. About 2/3 of the way through, I found myself wondering, "Where's the beach?" And then it showed up, so obviously! I loved this line: "An elasticized moment passed, time turned inside itself." Very creative and effective.
Very powerful piece. Wonderful, "real" conversation with God. Excellent writing.
Blessings, Lynda
This sort of thing can be tricky but you pulled it off well. Congrats on an excellent piece!
Brenda, as always, great work - and I just wanted to pop in and let you know that you made it into the semi-finals for the Beach Challenge. Only 21 entries got that far, and you did very well. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)