The Official Writing Challenge
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09/11/08
Entertaining story. Good descriptions. Glad the turtle and jackrabbit got away in the end. Very nicely done.
09/12/08
Your title caught my eye. I love your ending with its great twist. Nice work.
09/13/08
great story my kids loved it. We just finished the petercottontail series and this was a nice treat.
This was a lot of fun. Just add illustrations for a great children's book.
09/15/08
Shame on Jack! He needs to get saved....sounds like Snap is the one to witness. :)
Creative and charming entry!
What a great adventure. I read this to my kids and it was the first time they were quiet all morning. I'm so glad Jack and Snap (especially Snap) got away. Great children's story. Good job.