The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a lot of fun to read. I could picture the whole scene. A "snapping" fire is a very creative take on the topic. And the coffee, yum … I'm ready to get my second cup. :)
cute story thanks for sharing
Very cute. Brings back memories of great camping trips (and camp coffee!)
I wasn't expecting the fire to be the source of the snap, fun idea.
Very cute and fun story. I kind of wish a bear did appear at the camp at the end. That would be exciting. I'd love to see the women take on and win against a bear (not hurting him,of course!). Good job!
Loved it! Good tension going there!
Extremely creative with a surprise at the end. I really thought it was going to be a creature. Love it.
Very good read ... very creative. Great job.
I LOVE camping!!(LOL) My kids swore they heard a bear outside our tent in Maryland one year. I can totally relate to the MC.
This was a fun entry. I definitely found some humorous spots in it, but more than that, I found a good story of friendship. Your writing has really began excelling at a very fast pace. Keep up the good work! :)