The Official Writing Challenge
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I had to do a double-take at your title. LOL Your words are great, "near death experience" and "like a slug and plopped on the front of her snow-white blouse." I had no idea where this was going, and then, ... I LOVE your ending. You've packed so much fun in this (except, of course, for the line about the cat) :)
Love the person behind the voice in this piece. He's great at hiding behind everything and everyone, but he comes right out at the end.
Loved your descriptions and the language of this piece!
Congratulations on your EC. Loved the voice. Nice job with the topic.
I enjoyed your story from beginning to end - great MC voice & great descriptions. Congratulations on your EC.