The Official Writing Challenge
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Great story-telling! You drew me in from the beginning and kept me there 'til the end.
Well done!
Blessings, Lynda
I agree with Lynda. This held my attention to the very end. Good job. God bless you.
The account of David and Jonathan's friendship is a biblical favorite of mine. I really enjoyed your adaptation of it. I like your style of writing. Excellent!
Wonderful story telling! Certainly fits the ANGER theme. You make it come alive.
A great retelling. You caught my attention and kept it to the end. I felt Jonathan's righteous indignation and loved the image of him leaving the hall, with robes flowing behind him.
Excellent storytelling! I loved it start to finish.