The Official Writing Challenge
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I was captivated with your story. Your method of telling this was very effective (starting with being a nurse, then telling the story behind how you became a nurse and not being satisfied with the work. Part of me hopes this is a true story. You've written this very well.
I so love the image of the golden bridge and the peaceful way Mr. Johnson said goodbye. What a great story and a wonderful lesson at the end! Excellent writing!
"The bridge between us is the love of God in our hearts for one another," This summarises the real bridge story. But isn't it great that we have a golden bridge ahead of us? A lovely parallel of stories.