The Official Writing Challenge
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LOL! Very humorous. I really loved the Italian accent and the ending was quite funny. I hope this one does well. :)
07/24/08
Very enjoyable read, and well written and crafted. I too hope it does well!

Thank for your posting.
A very creative story--a pleasure to read. The punchline was perfect.
07/24/08
Great story. Although you could tell there was a major miscommunication going on, the ending was a surprise. Well done!
07/26/08
I loved it....LOL
LOL! Too funny. I've been in situations with similar mis-communications. Whatch your point of view shifts, but otherwise fun story.
This is one of favorite this week. Love the humor, great writing!
How clever! Could feel Mr. Carlinni's discomfort and the realtor's frustration. A pleasure to read. :)
07/29/08
Aaaargh! LOL You hooked me with this one. What does this man want? Fantastic storytelling that keeps building interest and suspense.
Very funny.Well done.....I so needed some humor!Hope you do well.God Bless. Elizabeth