The Official Writing Challenge
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Your title is just right for your poem. I liked the last verse the best.
I particularly liked the opening verse--the last two lines provide a poignant statement about memory. The specific incident with the old gent was an excellent example.
Your title fits perfectly, and there's an almost haunting feel to this! I liked the verse with the bow-tie the best! ^_^
And this poem tugged at the string of my heart...