The Official Writing Challenge
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06/06/08
I loved this story, although sad; it made a terrific point about Christians homes being "different"...which is true. The title says it all! VERY well written, also. Nice job! Kudos!
06/06/08
Nice story--so glad that Eddy had a place to go, even if it wasn't his own home.

Some of the dialogue seemed just a little bit stilted to me--not quite like real people speak.

I especially like stories that feature godly dads. This was nice.
06/06/08
You've written this heart-breaking/heart-warming story very well. I liked the "until the mad-dog is totally out of me" comment. The description of the godly Benson home was inspiring.