The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautifully written.
Your descriptions were vivid. I felt like I was turning the pages of a photo album as I read. Good job.
Very well written and hits the nail on the head when it comes to The Family Home; telling it like it is. Truly a delightful and honest glimpse into the true meaning of "family home"...Kudos!
Your message in this creative entry is excellent. You find out what is truly important during a crisis like this. My favorite sentence is, "Home is Ruthie's laugh, and it's Paula's friendly smile" then "Home is unconditional love." Nice work on this.
Your last three paragraphs are especially well done in this tender piece.
I like the way this is written and it really sends a clear message of what is most important, good job!