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Thank you for sharing this. I really enjoyed sharing this true to life story of yours. It was honest and refreshing.
Your story is an amazing story of struggle and inspiration. I like your repeating "Our Family Home" after each life-change is explained. I'm assuming this is a true story so I'll wish you "God's best" for your future. Nice work on this.
I really like the parallel structure of this, and the pacing.

Some small errors in punctuation, particularly comma usage, were mildly distracting.

You've had a hard but blessed life, and I'm so glad to read this affirming testimony.
A wonderful testimony - I like the repeating of the motherly love, giggles, etc, in each of your homes, and especially like the happy ending.
Every mistake is a lesson learnt, bringing us a step closer to the Lord each step of the way till we reach the moment of realization what we've missed without God and His Way. May God bless you and your family exceeding abundantly beyond what you ask or think!
Lots of emotion in here! I love how it is still a 'blessing' to have all of those children afterwards, and to see them as a blessing. You make motherhood sound like a lovely, beautiful thing. Well done! ^_^