The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/08
Wonderful creativity-- coming from this angle. Your title makes sense after reading the poem and ending prayer. I love the phrases like "Family Tree Blues," "wall-to-wall cousins," and the reference to the "old lady who lived in a shoe." Nice work on this!
06/01/08
Good rhyme, good meter until the last stanza, work on that one and you'll have a winner!
06/04/08
I like it. The rhythm is pretty consistent and it flows well. Good job!
HeeHee! Very cute poem. Congratulations, Marilyn!
06/05/08
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06/06/08
What a fun poem to read. Congratulations! Very witty.
06/06/08
A clever commentary on 1 Tim. 6:10. Well done.