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Your title is great (I had to smile)! I could see the four-year-olds in their navy pleated skirts and while sailor tops. This is heart-warming, nostalgic, with a touch of sadness. You've written this very well.
Heartwarming and yet so sad... two emotions intertwined beautifully through this story... very well written.
Life is about choices, good job writing here.
That was fantastic. Jenna is so real and her emotion flows so realistically. As a reader I could both feel her pain and at the same time feel intolerance for her excuses. I felt like she both loved and hated her cousin. It seemed quite real. Outstanding writing!