The Official Writing Challenge
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05/29/08
Your title is great (I had to smile)! I could see the four-year-olds in their navy pleated skirts and while sailor tops. This is heart-warming, nostalgic, with a touch of sadness. You've written this very well.
Heartwarming and yet so sad... two emotions intertwined beautifully through this story... very well written.
05/30/08
Life is about choices, good job writing here.
06/03/08
That was fantastic. Jenna is so real and her emotion flows so realistically. As a reader I could both feel her pain and at the same time feel intolerance for her excuses. I felt like she both loved and hated her cousin. It seemed quite real. Outstanding writing!