The Official Writing Challenge
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This is beautiful and rather haunting... the role of the father does supersede all, doesn't it?
06/13/05
A very touching poem, thank you for sharing it.
06/14/05
Very deep.Thanks for sharing.
06/15/05
Put music to this...thank you for posting.
06/15/05
I liked this piece. Good job.
06/16/05
This is deep and personal. There is the cry for a father who deserted his parental role. If only he could be found there is a chance for him. Very well written.
Very touching and heartfelt. I like the way you unified the poem by skillful use of repetition.
06/20/05
Very touching......