The Official Writing Challenge
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05/22/08
Excellent job of writing; however, I click Off the TV as the cheetah springs to kill a fawn, or an aligator brings down a zebra in the water, with horror that the camera person doesn't try to intervene. But I'm informed they don't intervene because they're portraying "Life In The Wild" as it truly is. But I continued reading this story, because I believed in my heart the writer would warn the squirrel in time...as this was pure entertainment, not food for the pet. I wanted to read how the "clap of hands" or "hollering" spared a life. (But this is just my personal opinion). But as I stated in the beginning...nicely written. Well done.
05/22/08
Great work--loved the description of the hunt.
05/23/08
Clever - great descriptions, and I LOVE the comparison to writing. I can so relate!