The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh my goodness! And all that time, I was picturing a dog. Hit me smack on the head with that twist! Well done.
This is a very well-written story; and while set in the depression, is a very true-to-life look at country living. Nice job.
I enjoyed the journey through the old country developed with the language and country setting descriptions. I was so glad that Wrinkles wasn't part of your Thanksgiving feast. I was worried about that.
Good voice for your MC, and nice job of foreshadowing, though for me it did take the punch away from the ending.
Congratulations on taking 14th place in your level with this piece, Marlene!