The Official Writing Challenge
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I really loved the gentle humor in this sweet story of getting a "sister" via a heretofore unimportant brother. Just one small suggestion: In the paragraph describing Laura, it would be better to put the verbs in present tense.
I love this story. Well told and quite funny.
Great story, enjoyable from start to finish. It took 18 years to get a sister, but you certainly seemed to have found one worth keeping.
What a delightful story, and so well told, with suspense all the way through. What is this writer getting at? How is this on the topic of in-law? Well, it was! And so uniquely developed, leading to a surprise ending...I LOVED it....And thanks for your comment on my RAINBOW BRIDGE....Helen
Just a note explaining why I didn't describe Laura in present terms - as my beloved sister-in-law Laura passed away...but did not want to reveal it in this Writing Challenge.
Well, Marilyn, after having received such a welcome "Private Message", I just had to come back and read your story again--the one you mentioned in your PM. And I loved your story all over again. You have such a unique way of bringing out intrigue and "wonder", by your story telling....Thanks for your note. Good to "talk" with you again...Blessings...Helen