The Official Writing Challenge
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This is really a story to make one think. I like how the comparisons to Ruth were brought out in the consideration of moving in with the mother-in-law. I only wish that she had revealed a Christ-like love, more in line with her witness, to her daughter-in-law. Still, as you pointed out, Naomi was bitter.
Beautiful job relating the story of Naomi and Ruth to a modern day situation.
I like the way you wanted to be more like Ruth even though your mother-in-law was no Naomi.

I'd like to hear more. Did you move in with her? Did you learn to appreciate one another?

Well done on the topic, well done.
Congratulations, Donna, on placing 13th in your level and 36th overall. Great job!