The Official Writing Challenge
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This is really a story to make one think. I like how the comparisons to Ruth were brought out in the consideration of moving in with the mother-in-law. I only wish that she had revealed a Christ-like love, more in line with her witness, to her daughter-in-law. Still, as you pointed out, Naomi was bitter.
05/15/08
Beautiful job relating the story of Naomi and Ruth to a modern day situation.
I like the way you wanted to be more like Ruth even though your mother-in-law was no Naomi.

I'd like to hear more. Did you move in with her? Did you learn to appreciate one another?

Well done on the topic, well done.
05/23/08
Congratulations, Donna, on placing 13th in your level and 36th overall. Great job!