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I feel very bad for Mary Magdelene in this heart-wrenching story. I think the fact that her parents named her that and in light of how they have acted toward her, the name seems very foretelling. I was surprised upon reading how the father was treating the mother. Though I'm glad her prayers were answered and she is leaving the house, I feel bad about the situation and remain worried about her as a reader. How will her home life impact her in the future? Perhaps, this story is not over.
So sad that children have to be raised in this kind of home. The MC can be sure that God sees and knows what she's gone through.
Mary Magdaline's name defintiely got my interest. Your story is very heart-breaking. As to the parents being "Christian," only God knows. If this is true, I hope Mary is able to forgive and not follow in her parents "foorsteps".