The Official Writing Challenge
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05/01/08
Ok, TISSUE please! Wow, that was touching. Soooo very touching. You really caught my emotions off guard, the sign of building a story very well. Good job. This piece is a treasure.
I like this a lot. This is so filled with character description and dialogue. I enjoyed it from start to finish.
Wow -- great story here! Oh how easy it is to misinterpret and read things into what our teens do. So glad this mom and son have what it takes to keep building their relationship!
Ouch. Thanks for the reminder not to judge. This sounded so real that I felt like an eavesdropper.
05/07/08
Great job of characterization - and I love the misinterpretations, and how wonderful it all turned out. Nicely done.
05/07/08
Super! I'm all choked up. My daughter gave me a similar gift one mother's day. Great writing. Love it!