The Official Writing Challenge
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04/24/08
I enjoyed this tender story -- a perfect example of "a little child shall lead them." I like how you illustrated that Cole didn't have to go away to be on his own mission trip. Your title is perfect. I enjoyed the picture of "dents in the wall from their rough-housing." You've written this very well.
I like the relationship between Uncle Len and Cole. The faith of a child indeed. It was wonderful. I especially liked the second to last paragraph-great job! ^_^
04/27/08
I liked this very much! It brings out the truth that the simplicity of faith is best seen in a little child.
I think that's why Jesus loved them around him, don't you?
04/29/08
God creates opportunities for people to be led to Christ, whether by a child or an adult. You told this story in such a simple and effortless way just as Cole led his uncle back to the Lord.