The Official Writing Challenge
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Absolutely creative and adorable! When are you getting an illustrator for this delightful children's book?
04/18/08
Your title is fun. Your character names "Chipper, Dapple, Dilly, and Bucky" are precious! I like this description, "Chipper's acorn-brown eyes." The lesson in this story is great "special…specialness". This is very entertaining.
04/18/08
Very well written children's story. I can picture beautifully illustrated pictures for this , too. And the characters are awesome!
I like the title. It goes quite well with this cute children's story. I really would like to see this made into a book. I'd definitely buy a copy to read to my niece. :)

Wonderful writing that can be enjoyed by all ages.
04/21/08
Delightful, entertaining, creative, adorable. Great message told in a fresh, wonderful way. Great job.
04/21/08
Shirley, this is wonderful. Such adorable little personalities these characters have. Great message too. I'm definitely reading this one to my kiddos!
Loved everybit of this, I feel we have a placer here. Outstanding!
04/21/08
This was the sweetest children's story. I LOVED it!
04/21/08
Hey, I found it! Very precious children's story, fun to read.
I definitely want to see this illustrated. Absolutely delightful.
04/23/08
I absolutely love LOVE this story, Shirley! I'd love to see you write more kids stories.
Laury
Ah-dorable! I love it. So cute and a bit cuddly too. ^_^ I liked the word "Specialness" Children would love this story-that's for sure. It has all the lovely makings of a woodland fairy-tale. ^_^

04/24/08
Congratulations, Shirley! I knew this was a good one!
04/24/08
Shirley -- Super congrats on placing with this!
04/24/08
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. Very cute children's story. Nice job with the topic.
04/24/08
Delightful! A wonderful story with a great message.
04/26/08
I could just picture the scene. What a cute story and wonderful message. I hope this isn't the last we hear of you and this story.
Fun story! I hope you find an illustrator--I'd love to see the pics that go along.