The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the voice you've used in this. It adds to the inexplicable sadness. Well done.
Very nice job. It was unique and most revealing.
Haunting, but very very good!
Oh how very sad! Your clipped words made the story-poem all the more powerful...Well done! So very well done. It is hard to tell a whole story in a short poem, but you did it. You used word pictures to help the reader get the poin....Daddy, never coming back....Helen