The Official Writing Challenge
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Oh LOL! This is funny, I giggled at the end and had to smile when I could breathe again. I loved the witty dialouge here and especially using Solomon as the 'sales clerk'. That was just too funny-as was the details on the different packages. You did well with just using dialouge to devlop this, I could see everything playing out exactly as you wrote it. Very nicely done! This is one of my favorites for this week! ^_^
I loved your creative approach. You used a humorous style, but wove in essential truths about being a father.
Your title grabbed me, too, though I surmised it would be someone shopping for a father, but I was in no way disappointed in my mistaken guess.
04/18/08
Very witty! Well done.