The Official Writing Challenge
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Very dramatic - Both beginning and ending were perfect! I was torn between feeling pity for your MC and a tiny bit of anger towards her attitude.
04/12/08
Very creative presentation to the topic. Entertaining read.
04/18/08
Congratulations, Janice, on placing 15th in your level and 37th overall. Great work! :D
04/21/08
Very well told. Gertrude certainly had the heart of a servant; yet I began to feel resentment toward the self-centered parents and the ungrateful grandchildren. I was wishing toward the end that Gertrude would try some "tough love." You kept the ending a surprise, but I couldn't help feel sorry for her. She had the heart of a servant, but was treated like a slave....Very sad...Thanks for your comment on my "Father" story. More, much more, of his character has been brought out in my book, "If You Only Knew!"....Helen