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I loved this--the message is wonderful and powerful. Personally, I wish it hadn't been set within a dream, it seemed (to me!) to lessen the impact and take away from it--but that's just my opinion. The message is quite powerful, and one that I needed to hear.
It's not easy to ignore the cares of this world. It takes focus. This story inspires that focus.
This struck me like a bolt of lightning. Just one life...and so short, and what had I done for others? Great message here and made me THINK about "Self", "Faith" and what to do about the remaining years of my life. Great entry! An edifying dream and Kudos to you for a job well done.
This was excellent.
Beautiful job! A great reminder of what life is really about.
I LOVE a good analogy, and this is DEFINITELY it! Excellent - congratulations on your highly commended. Wonderful piece.
Congratulations on your Highly Commended. This is well written. It reminds me of "Hinds Feet on High Places," and the Bible story about the farmer building larger barns for his abundant crops. Nice job with the topic.
I love your personifications of Self and Faith. Great writing, great story. Congratulations on being Highly Commended - well deserved. :)