The Official Writing Challenge
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This moved me to tears. You built up the conflict and emotion so well, tipped it off with the brawl, and then allowed me to gasp a sigh of relief at your ending statement. WOW.
I have no way of knowing how it feels to be in this man's shoes, except through a well-written and beautiful story like this one. Ah. The problems of humanity and need for grace is so evident in this wonderful entry. Great writing.
I feel like you have been there - like "I" have been there. Absolutely excellent.
Congratulations on your 3rd place. The writing is very good--you capture the heart and head of the MC very well. Nice job with the topic.
Congratulations, if this was written to get us to look at ourselves, you got your wish. KEEP WRITING and God bless.
Congratulations on 3rd place in Advanced! EXcellent piece!!!!!
Such a cleverly-done piece of writing. I loved the point of view and it really made me 'feel' his pain. Fantastic! And Congratulations!
Congratulations, Jake! This is a very sobering piece, for sure! Well-deserved win!