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Topic: Illustrate the meaning of "Actions Speak Louder than Words" (without using the actual phrase). (02/21/08)
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TITLE: A LIGHTHOUSE FOR HIM | Previous Challenge Entry
By Angelo Gabriele
02/24/08 -
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Let my light the pathway show
Lord let me be a lighthouse
To those lost and sad with woe.
Lord let me be a lighthouse
In this world of doubt and sin
Lord let me be a lighthouse
To guide the lost to Him
Lord let me be a lighthouse
May my beam forever shine
Lord let me be a lighthouse
To the glory that is Thine
Lord let me be a lighthouse
To give light to all who pass
Lord let me be a lighthouse
To guide them to peace at last.
Lord let me be a lighthouse
Let the glowing warm the way
Lord let me be a lighthouse
Let them come to Thee today.
Lord let me be a lighthouse
Let the brightness dispel the din
Lord let me be a lighthouse
With its streaming conquer sin
Lord let me be a lighthouse
Let my searching never cease
Lord let me be a lighthouse
'Til all are blessed with peace.
Matthew 5:16 NIV-In the same way, let your light shine before men, that they may see your good deeds and praise your Father in heaven.
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In a poem like this with a lot of repetition, you want to come up with some good, complex rhymes, to counteract the predictability of the stanzas. Give your readers something delightful at the end of each stanza.
There's some very pleasant imagery in this.