The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a very good story. It's so good, I now have a sympathy headache for your MC. Not really, but you did a great job putting me in the story. I felt for the mom and was touched by the kindess that was shown to her. Great last line. Super job!
Great story and it fits the topic perfectly.
Very nicely written.
Oh, I really empathized with your MC. The descriptions put the reader right with her in her pain and I could feel her relief at receiving the lasagna and each small blessing that came her way. Then the teddy bear incident brought tears to my eyes. That was such a touching act of caring. Your ending sentence, Love is a great pain reliever, is perfect for this. This is such heart-warming writing. Thanks!
Nice story.
I love the message of this story. The teddy bear was the crowning touch.
Sweet story.