The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/08
I like your repeating first word in several of your stanzas. (I believe thats called anaphora). Your thoughts are so good, lost opportunities taken so lightly Satan steals time,then your ending thoughts Life in increments of time given away, and lived for others. Your title is perfect for these. Its a beautiful thing to see a person doing what you describe.
Enjoyed this poem.
So very well written and beautiful! This really spoke to me, and it's right on target for the topic.