The Official Writing Challenge
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This piece has a lot of personality - I feel like I got to know these folks.

I got a bit lost in the first paragraph - maybe I wasn't reading it right, but I couldn't follow, in particular, the last sentence.

This feels so real. Very nice.
I'm thinking that Alzheimer's is setting in and the husband walked into the kitchen in his birthday suit... Your writing is very heart-warming. This could almost be devotional in nature because your ending is sooo good.
Beth, that's what I was thinking too. This is such a nice piece. It could use some proofreading but otherwise, very good.