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This is certainly descriptive! It is brimming with visual examples and imagery, the ending was such a relief. I'm glad that 'they' didn't win that day. Great job with this, your title certainly hints at what is to come and you followed through wonderfully. ^_^
Very well presented. I loved the way you demonstrated sin's gradual hold upon its victim, especially how lust overtook the man so subtly at the beginning. Thanks for sharing.
02/14/08
A very visual piece, and powerfully descriptive. Keep writing!
02/15/08
An interesting take on the topic. Creative and well-written.
Just my opinion, but I don't think you need the first paragraph.
02/20/08
Interesting journey you took us on. I'm not quite sure how it relates to topic. I wouldn't think a sinner who was set free, would think to cry over spilt milk. But that's just me. Good job.